Great style...
Yeah, a little too EMO for me aswell...however i do love te use of colour and the feel from it, the characters do come across really well and the animation is really good...I can't help but feel you have a darker side to you('re) art, and you should have ago at something a little darker while moving away from the anime style. The ppan across her black eyes was ominous.
4/5
8/10